Reviews For Unplanned Futures
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Reviewer: melakem Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful! I love the honesty of their fears/anxieties and the sureness of their ultimate reactions.

Reviewer: HOCRUX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

it's really a great story. good job. i love it.

Reviewer: kerosinkanister Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2007 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I recently came across a rec for this story so I re-read it and decided I should review here since the story really ougt to have more than no reviews.

 

It's really a wonderful story and, like some of your others, could be much longer to tell the same tale and it wouldn't be too much, at least if you wrote it.

 

I liked the juxtaposition at the start of Hermione's attitude compared to carefree Ron at the party.  The emotions all seemed spot on.

 

<i>He paced around her small kitchen. “Were you planning on telling me about this, or was it going to be another one of your secrets?”</i>

 

That line, in particular, was really good.  Just a little hint of problems they've had in canon, but it was nice that it wasn't some huge deal.  Leaving the end open was a great touch as well. 

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