Date: 08/26/2008 11:34 AM Title: One Shot
This is just such a wonderful story. I have loved frost, anywhere really, but especially on windows, since I was very small. I love the patterns, I love the icy color of it, I love the way it feels and the way it tastes. And now, I love the way you've used the imagery of it for this tale.
When Ron fiddles around with the frost, when he thinks of Harry and tries to contemplate his own thoughts, I can feel the same obsessive interest I felt as a child. I like the way frost simply is, it just exists because it does, and I like the way Harry's and Ron's feelings for eachother seem to mirror that. As you've written them, they simply belong together because they exist.
Very nicely done. I'm not a fan of slash smut, but read slash occasionally if the relationships are well done. Something about your description led me in, and I'm so glad it did. You've created a tender, loving, matter-of-fact relationship where gender is unimportant. Just like life. Thank you. I'll be adding this to my favorites list. (And thanks, too, for giving me a middle of the day oppurtunity to think of how nice it is to spoon in bed with my husband!)
Date: 10/05/2005 10:17 PM Title: One Shot
That was a beautiful story.I could keenly feel the weather, the aftereffects of war, the wandering nature of Harry's life - plus The need for sleep, comfort, laughter, and love. Your characters were wonderfully written. I loved the unspoken dialogue between Harry and Ron... their closeness and also inability to cross that barrier for a long time. It was neat the way that they were really already there. Loved that Harry had been waiting at Ron's flat too. You have such a poetic writing style. I truly enjoyed this fic!