Date: 04/12/2009 04:38 PM Title: More Deeply Marked Than Love (N'oubliez pas Harry)
So the tears pricking my eyes are a compliment to the tale. Perhaps what I'm finding most rewarding about this series, actually, is how you portray the complexities of maintaining a relationship, rather than just forming one. Ron's insecurities and neediness seem to be present, to some extent, in all of us, and how the partner handles it makes a tremendous difference, though, as you show here, no particular response works for everyone. Most of all, it's so vividly apparent how much they all love each other, through the disaggreements and the squabbles and, at times, the hurt. The ache of gratitude is a rare thing indeed to see in a fic, and I'm impressed to see the depth and breadth of emotions you successfully convey. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you for a beautiful fic.