[Report This]Date: 02/16/2006 02:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 : The Symbol on the Door
I'm so happy to see another chapter.
Ah, you're getting deeper into the mystery here. I can suspect that Cecilia is a victim, or on her way to becoming a victim, of the same predator who has put those other women into St. Mungo's. It seems like a virtual rape in a way.
Hmm.... Can't wait for the next chapter.
And, psst, "...down his stomach and around his naval" should be "navel".
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2006 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 2 : The Legilimens
I'm still very much enjoying this story. The shift to Draco's POV helped this chapter, I think, because it gave us some insight into his mind - pun not intended. But I also am intrigued by the conversation Draco overheard at the end. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
We are planning to bring more light to that conversation as the story progresses and in that bring more light to Draco's past. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2006 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Diagnosis
Oooh, this is an intriguing beginning. I really like it so far.
Author's Response: YAY! Thank you so much for reading.