Reviews For The Hidden Doorway
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Date: 02/16/2006 02:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 : The Symbol on the Door

I'm so happy to see another chapter.

Ah, you're getting deeper into the mystery here.  I can suspect that Cecilia is a victim, or on her way to becoming a victim, of the same predator who has put those other women into St. Mungo's.  It seems like a virtual rape in a way.

Hmm.... Can't wait for the next chapter.

And, psst, "...down his stomach and around his naval" should be "navel".

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Date: 02/07/2006 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 2 : The Legilimens

I'm still very much enjoying this story.  The shift to Draco's POV helped this chapter, I think, because it gave us some insight into his mind - pun not intended.  But I also am intrigued by the conversation Draco overheard at the end.  Can't wait for the next chapter.


Author's Response:

We are planning to bring more light to that conversation as the story progresses and in that bring more light to Draco's past. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you like it.

 

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Date: 01/28/2006 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Diagnosis

Oooh, this is an intriguing beginning.  I really like it so far.


Author's Response: YAY! Thank you so much for reading.

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