Date: 05/19/2008 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 12 : The Comfort
NOOOOOOOO! I want more!
Brilliant story. I love the way you took your time to build up the plot, that you took all the effort for character development, plot, and technical stuff, and especially that your version of Draco is't all black or white. Very nice, I look forward to the next part!
Date: 01/24/2007 01:00 PM Title: Chapter 11 : The Telling of Dreams
I read your story last month from start to finish in about 3 days - a true feat considering it was right before Christmas and I have 2 small children! I loved it enough to put it in my favorites so I would not miss an update. I was too busy to leave a review themn, so here goes.
You have one of the creepiest stories I have ever read, as well as one of the hottest! I love the tension, the slutty friend, the powerful Ginny and the subordinate Draco. The villian - whoever he is - is the foulest, wierdest, most horrifying psycopath's I have ever had the fortune to be exposed.
Now, WE NEED AN UPDATE NOW!!!!! We have finally started getting to sleep without fear!
Very well written and very much missed. Good luck on the update.
Date: 09/05/2006 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 8 : The Boy Without a Name
The purpose may not have been to creep the reader out, but this was an absolutely creepy chapter. I understand it's necessity -- and it works very well to delve into the head of the person they're after.
You've utterly piqued my interest as to who exactly he is, whose name he found as his father's.
do you know how happy it makes me to know I creeped you out? LOL!
Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/21/2006 08:28 PM Title: Chapter 7 : The Real Story
Very very interesting. I like how you woke the backstory in and in just the right place. I can imagine that Draco would be staring at the ceiling and thinking randomly after having just gotten his brains shagged out.
But who did Harry go out with? *grin*
Date: 04/21/2006 03:01 PM Title: Chapter 5 : The Game Begins
I'm finally getting the chance to read chapter 5 and have come to the conclusion that I really, really want to know what's going on. I have no patience to figure it out :)
But I'm not going to be placated, so I will sit here and eagerly anticipate the next chapter. And hope you throw out some small clue about what's going on.