Date: 02/10/2010 09:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
A story wonderful in its simplicity, loved it!
Date: 11/16/2008 05:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
A trully believable first kiss fic. you really can imagine this happening with Ron & Hermione.
Date: 08/08/2008 02:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Wow. That's an awfully, ummmm....evocative? well described? detailed? lead up to a simple kiss. In fact, I'd say the preceding paragraphs turn it into something much more than a simple kiss. (I don't think that's easy to do. Congratulations!)
Date: 07/28/2008 09:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
where is the rest of the story?
[Report This]Date: 07/20/2007 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just lovely. *Sigh*
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2006 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was SO wonderful! I love stories like this, they just instantly trasnport a person back to a "big" first kiss w/ an important boy or girl.
Fantastic story.
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2006 07:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think you completely captured that nervous flutter that all girls get when they're alone in the dark with the boy they fancy.
This was so good and so true to character! Wonderful job!