Date: 07/23/2006 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't think this songs fits for only the older readers. I was on the edge of my seat after Harry knocked Ron out, and waiting for a bigger argument than I got. Guess Ron mellowed out over the years. I like how the end shows Harry's reluctanct acceptance of the fact that they WILL eventually age and time will pass, while Ron, as is his way, seems in denial of it while at the same time showing of his not-so-subconsicous insecurities.
I remember what it was like when my eyesight got worse, at just 15. My mom used to joke and say 'Just means you're getting old.'
The title fits the story very well and the anticipation of waiting and not knowing what's actually going on until the end is something I will always love about a good story. This one was simple, and yet also had the drama that just seems to make life interesting while driving you insane at the time. The anecdotes you bring up when you're old and sit in rocking chairs on your front porch. Great job.