Date: 04/09/2006 08:58 AM Title: The Shove
Eeeeee!! Sirius can be so horribly clueless, and Remus is so proud and stubborn, but with a little push ... wonderfulness!! Ooh, this is all so lovely!
Date: 04/09/2006 08:50 AM Title: The Bystander
Ooh, excellent plot twists! I found the POV shifts in this chapter a bit confusing, but I love the content. Poor Joe! And Peter's just adorable in his cluelessness, isn't he?
Date: 04/09/2006 08:39 AM Title: The Upset
Ooh, I think I kind of like Joe - he's a very complicated character, and yet, really quite simple. You've done a great deal with this almost-OC. Must read more.
[Report This]Date: 04/07/2006 07:40 PM Title: The Shove
I loved this the first time I saw it on LJ and it's still one of my favorites. I particularly like how devious you made James and Remus. You capture the marauders quite well. You also demonstrate Sirius' loyalty with his self-destructive streak beautifully. Oh, and the hot box sex is quite yummy as well.
Date: 04/06/2006 04:32 PM Title: The Date
OMG, that is incredibly hot! I love the level of Joe's enticement - pushing a little, but paying a lot of attention to Sirius's response. Sirius is so adorably clueless. And did I mention this was hot? (Will read the rest later - gotta run!)
Date: 04/06/2006 04:24 PM Title: The Promise
I'm really enjoying this so far! I love seeing a premise that I haven't seen before. I'd write more feedback, but I'm in too much of a hurry to get to the next chapter. Oh - and the origami Padfoot was ADORABLE!