Date: 04/02/2011 07:40 PM Title: One shot
Too cute!!! and hot!!!
Date: 07/28/2008 02:02 PM Title: One shot
well merry christmas and ring the bells ......i like it!
but something in his voice told me she was about to see another side of Ron. best part by far.Date: 10/21/2007 08:17 PM Title: One shot
What a hot little story! I loved it! I'm hoping there is more like this!
[Report This]Date: 08/30/2007 08:41 PM Title: One shot
Hi!! I just want to tell you that I like this story very much!! Looking forward to read another stories from Saraek! Especially about Ron & Hermione.. They are my favorite couple!!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2007 07:13 PM Title: One shot
Loved it! Very hot... rowr!
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2006 05:46 AM Title: One shot
I really enjoyed it! You write beautifully.
[Report This]Date: 05/23/2006 06:54 AM Title: One shot
I just wanted to bring your attention to one thing that I noticed.
The paragraph that starts with: She moaned at his words, loving... <There is one part> but something in his voice told me that she was about to see another side of Ron. <It sounds like you were there and if you were, I am definitley jealous. But I didn't know if you meant to do this or not. If you didn't maybe you could change it to (told her). That would make it sound better. Sorry, I'm an english major and grammer and wording and spelling is the first thing I see in a story.> However, it was a wonderful story, I love how they were so in love that they just had to do it there. They couldn't wait. The passion was perfect and the description was brilliant. Keep up the good work.
Jennifer monkeygrl_2004@yahoo.com