Date: 11/17/2013 08:05 PM Title: Renovation
wanted to read the whole thing before i gave review. good writing. loved how you referenced old quotes from previous books. the storyline itself is well written and well thought out in keeping with character personalities. at first i thought i'd have a gripe about harry's mixed feelings, but as i thought about it i realised that; other than his crush on cho and what he had with ginny, harry really didn't kno anything about loving someone, because he was never shown love. i like how you touched on that, and made him aware of it within himself. bravo. all in all this was a pleasant read and hope there's more to come. thank you
Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to review, and so kindly. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and that Harry's mixed feelings worked for you. I just started posting Part Two, "Reawakening." (There will be five parts total.)
Date: 11/02/2013 12:44 PM Title: Renovation
Not a single review or comment after 20 chapters?
Let me be the first then.
I am not really into non-canon pairings in fan fiction, but this story is well wrought and a good reading.
You explained you have all chapters ready beforehand, so this story will most likely be finished also.
With the Potterverse sort of fading out, most stories never reach the final chapters as their (I presume mostly teen age) authors loose interest or simply move on in life.
Thanks for your story.
Author's Response: I just figured everyone was waiting till the end to comment. :-) (I'm finishing up writing the last Part this month, and it'll be about 150 chapters total.) I appreciate you giving this story a chance, even though it's noncanonical, and I'm glad you're enjoying it.