Reviews For Longing
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Reviewer: dumdoc Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2008 06:15 AM Title: Longing

A very nice treatment of something treated poorly and cheaply by others.

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Date: 03/19/2008 04:53 AM Title: Marking Time (By Counting Hours Apart)

WOW....just not enough story here. I hurt for all 3 of them. 

Author's Response:

It is a really difficult situation for all three of them. And it is a short ficlet; it was never intended to fill that whole bracket of time apart, just illuminate it a little. If you want to know more about their relationship, you can read the other three stories in this verse - Longing, Bedfellows and Teasing.

Thank you for reading! 

Reviewer: 8thWeasley Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 05:12 PM Title: Marking Time (By Counting Hours Apart)

That was simply precious.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 08:15 PM Title: Bedfellows

Oh this was wonderful!!! and this line right here:

“Yeah,” he said earnestly.

I eyed him sceptically. “You’re not just saying that to get into my pants?”

“No!” he protested indignantly. I sniggered, and he gave me a sheepish grin. “Okay, I am trying to get into your pants. But I meant what I said.


Author's Response: Thank you! I had to inject a bit of humour in there. This is new and frightening for both of them, but they're still best mates, and I thought truth in the form of a joke would ease the tension at a moment like this.

Reviewer: badcharlotte05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 04:33 AM Title: Bedfellows

I've read Longing and now Bedfellows. I wasn't really into Ron/Harry - until I read these. It's just beautiful, darling. Can we expect some more from the series? *begs*

"Freckles everywhere?" --> My absolute fave! :**

Author's Response: I don't really know how many more I'll write of these. I've already got a rather large Ron/Harry series in progress on my fiction journal and it's taking up a lot of my focus. If I do write more in this 'verse, I'll make sure I cross post them here, though. Thank you for your lovely feedback!

Reviewer: girl from ipanema Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2008 05:23 PM Title: Longing

You really need to make a piece that addresses how Harry relates to Hermione, after all she is the one who stuck with him through thick, thin and not so sure. And, it would be nice to see the full trio dynamic together. Just a thought. You are a very sensitive writer and it is a pleasure to read your story.

Author's Response: I have one that I plan to write in the near future, but two large series I'm working on are taking up my time. When I write it, it'll be posted here. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: laurac Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2008 11:09 AM Title: Longing

That was a very nice trio fic without being graphic.  Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted this to have a gentle feel, and smut didn't fit. However, I did write an "outtake" for this called Bedfellows, which is being approved by the mods as we speak, which was specifically about Ron and Harry's first time, and it's smutty. It just felt better as its own piece.

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