Date: 04/03/2013 11:29 PM Title: Broken Wands
This seems great, and Ron and Harry were very cute.
Although this is a sad note, this reminds me of how two advocates of gay marriage who eventually got married divorced (or broke up? I hardly remember). : The problems were unrelated to the marriage and campaign, though. It's just sad.
Date: 03/09/2007 10:54 PM Title: Broken Wands
OMG! Why have I not read this before? I adored this story. I kept having it on my need-to-read list, but somehow it didn't happen. I should be shot for waiting for so long!
I adored your Harry in this - he's so wonderfully confused and just exactly how I would expect him to be post-Voldy. Ron was great too, but you really nailed Harry. And I love Molly, too. I love that she and Hermione were plotting together.
I'm going to go to bed now with this happy ending in my brain. Good dreams for me!
Date: 07/23/2006 11:58 PM Title: Over the Hill is Better Than Under It
I don't think this songs fits for only the older readers. I was on the edge of my seat after Harry knocked Ron out, and waiting for a bigger argument than I got. Guess Ron mellowed out over the years. I like how the end shows Harry's reluctanct acceptance of the fact that they WILL eventually age and time will pass, while Ron, as is his way, seems in denial of it while at the same time showing of his not-so-subconsicous insecurities.
I remember what it was like when my eyesight got worse, at just 15. My mom used to joke and say 'Just means you're getting old.'
The title fits the story very well and the anticipation of waiting and not knowing what's actually going on until the end is something I will always love about a good story. This one was simple, and yet also had the drama that just seems to make life interesting while driving you insane at the time. The anecdotes you bring up when you're old and sit in rocking chairs on your front porch. Great job.